Idea for a haunted love story

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I got this idea on Saturday while on my morning walk. The song “Cry for You” came up and this idea unfolded in my mind. I grabbed my smartphone and recorded the idea so that it wouldn’t be lost among my synapses.

“Funny, I don’t remember waking up this morning.”

So begins a haunted love story. At the end of the story you find out that the guy poisoned them when they went to bed so they could be together forever. He was afraid that she was going to leave him.

She never was intending to do so. She was actually planning a surprise party for him. But when she realizes that he killed them, he does lose her forever.

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